Written Manuscript Assessment

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“She has helped me identify the moments in my writing when I was backing away from the real story or descending into repetition.” — Michael Lauchlan

A written manuscript assessment is a careful, detailed review your book’s strengths and potential, and includes specific advice for moving forward. The assessment focuses on “big picture” story-level issues such as point of view, plot and structure, character arc, and pacing. My goal is to identify your next steps for revision, to suggest options and examples — all to help you feel excited about revising your work. 

  • You’ll receive an assessment letter (2,000 to 5,000 words) of my insights and advice.
  • We’ll follow up with a Zoom conversation, to discuss any questions you may have about the assessment — and to brainstorm more options for revision.

A written manuscript assessment is especially well suited to an experienced writer and/or a writer who will be able to work independently after receiving a detailed written description of the work’s strengths and needs. If you feel you need more ongoing guidance as you revise, consider a manuscript-assessment coaching session.

Ready to get started? Or do you have questions? Please contact me. Or return to the full Editing & Coaching Services list.

A chart describing manuscript assessment process: (1) email Martha to discuss your vision fo the work and your concerns, (2) agree on tasks, schedule, costs, and pay a deposit to lock in time in Martha's schedule, (3) email Martha; she starts assessing the work; (4) receive and review the assessment letter, and meet via Zoom to discuss any concerns and next steps